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Post by kazamafan15 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:42 pm

if you haven't when the devil gene took over the world. fan fic then please read it it has alot of Information too Understand this.
now I will post Chapter 1 tomorrow.
I will give you guys already some Info.
Main Characters
Ichiro(son of Jin and Ling)
Ling
Lili
Devil
Jin
other important characters .
Bryan
The commander
Julia.
Jun (as ghost)

Short story. More will be in Chapter 1
15 years after the battle against devil the G Corporation has taken almost the hole world.
exept for Europe and the USA.
most of the Rebels are death only a few have survived.
and now there all over Europe and the USA.
More will be in chapter 1

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Post by Admin on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:59 pm

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Post by kazamafan15 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:01 pm

yes I have been planning this

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Post by KazuyaFreak on Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:51 pm

Paul never fits into a story hmph....
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Post by jeswd on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:32 am

^You can make own story where's Paul and other your main characters.

Great! Julia is here!
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Post by KM_Lord on Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:52 am

Ichiro...very interesting...new genaration of Kazama´s family...

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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Jul 28, 2009 8:03 am

before you start reading this please ready when the devil gene took over the world first it might help you Understand this.
also since this is a Prologue and not a real event in the story I will keep this very short the other chapters will be longer of course.
I am planning 16 chapters 4 more then my other Fan fic
Chapter 1: Nightmare Prologue
In the far far Future.
The Devil Gene Unleashed.
The World is on the point of Being Destroyed.
The Evil G corporation has overthrown the old Mishima Zaibatsu.
and now hold countless of countrys under control.
The Rebels have all been destroyed.
only a handfull of Rebels have escaped the G corporation.
the ones who have survived are.
Jin Ichiro Ling Lili Julia and The Commander.
and also the daughter of Lili and the Commander (Celine)
dissapearing into Europe or The USA.
Devil's spies have located a Rebel.
in Russia.
The head of the G corporation has been sent (By him self) To destroy him.

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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Jul 29, 2009 6:36 am

eventough there wasn't replied on the other chapter I will post this one.
yeah It's a double post but I can't wait for everyone to reply.
CHAPTER 2: DEVIL AND HIS NEW SLAVE?
Devil has been sent (by him self) too Destroy the Rebel which his spies found.
the Journey too the rebel wasn't easy even for Devil.
He found lots of soldiers but not with guns no with Swords!
He quickly finished the soldiers on his way off.
then he came too a Elevator.
everytime it stopped Devil knew there were comming soldiers too him.
but those soldiers were no match for Devil's power.
Finally after hours of walking he found the rebel.
Apparantly was it the commander but Devil sensed another person.
A young littel girl.
after the Two (Devil and The Commander saw eachother)
The Two started to fight.
but the Commander had no Weapons nor did he had the power of the Angel gene.
In short He was no match for Devil and his Devil Gene.
After the fight Devil killed his opponent.
then he saw the littel girl.
Her name was Celine she told him.
and she was the daughter of The Commander and Lili.
she also told that she was 13 years old and that her mother was gone for years.
Devil: your father wanted you death I protected you from him.
Celine: did he really wanted to kill me?
I can't thank you enough mister.
Devil: come with me more soldiers will be here soon.
and Celine had no choice and eventually decided too go with Devil.
*Meanwhile*
Ichiro was playing with his mother Ling.
after awhile Ling said too Ichiro I have too talk too you it's very Important.
Ichiro: ok mother.
Ling: what I am gonna tell you is about your dad Jin kazama.
he left a few years ago as you know right?
Ichiro: yes I know.
Ling: what you don't know is why he left.
well son he left too fight against the G corporation our biggest enemy.
Ichiro: Really? my father a Rebel? but where is he now?
Ling: I wish I knew son I haven't had a message from him in two years.
I guess it's not save for him too send us messages.
and one other thing.
Just like your father do you have the power of the Angel Gene.
Ichiro: the Angel gene?
Ling: yes it's your special powers.
Ichiro: cool! but I don't need them really.
Ling: not yet son but later you will later we need you to fight with us against the G corporation.
Ichiro said Ok and the two talked further.
*three months later*
Celine was sitting on her knees before Devil.
Devil: you were weak when I found you but know your hatred has become your strenght.
At last the devil gene is with you.
Rise my new servent.
Celine: what is your wish my Master?
Devil: your training is almost done it's now time for your true test.
Celine: your spies have located a Rebel?
Devil: yes A few Commanders from the Russian army in Europe.
Destroy them and bring me there weapons.
Celine: I shall leave at once master.
the end of Chapter 2

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Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:32 pm

you can now leave reguests in comments for your favourite characters too le tthem come.
CHAPTER 3: GOOD OR EVIL?
Devil had sent Celine on a mission too take out the commanders from the Russian army.
this was her first official mission alone normally she went with Soldiers and/or with Bryan.
but Devil tought she was old and strong enough too go alone on a mission only a few soldiers went with her too stay at the ship.
on her journey she was told by the soldiers that she was the youngest soldier ever too work for the G corporation.
they also told her that she would do fine on her first real mission.
Celine asked to them what's gonna happen when I will fail?
they told her You'll die.
that isn't actually what a girl wants too hear.. Celine told them.
a few hours later they arrived.
Soldiers: good luck and don't return until you have killed them.
Celine: but where should I find them?
the soldiers pointed at the threehouse a few meters away.
they should be there hiding.
kill them and you'll be a true soldier.
and she went on her way.
Ichiro asked too his mother if they could talk.
Ling: of course Ichiro is there something wrong?
Ichiro: well yes mother I lately can sense things.
like I know who has the Devil gene.
Ling looked at the floor.....
Ling: well that's because your powers have become to awaken.
you'll be able too do much more things later only if your father was her he could train you. I don't know alot about the Angel gene.
your father has trained you in Traditional Karate when you were young but you won't be able too do that if your enemy has the power of the Devil gene.
however for you I have some training.
come with me please.
and they walked outside.
Ichiro: so what am I supposed to do now?
Ling: do you see that table over there?
Ichiro: yes but why?
Ling: try too move it without holding it with your hands.
just believe in your self and it will work.
Ichiro: ok I will,
Ichiro tought I can do it I can do it.
while he pointed his hand on the table.
after awhile finally the table came into the air.
Ling: Brillaint son now try too move it up and right.
so he did.
Ling: excellent Ichiro.
now try too throw it away with your powers.
Ichiro: but it's your table mom.
Ling: just do it it's an old table.
Ichiro: ok if you say so.
he threw the table away without any problems..
that was too easy Ichiro said..
and he moved his hands but only he find out that he can actually push things away buy moving his hands.
Ichiro: I love these powers.
Ling: I can understand that.
now let's try something more difficult.
Ichiro: what then?
Ling: shooting an inferno from your hand.
just concentrate and I am sure it will work.
Ichiro I will try.......
there only came out a small inferno.
Ling: that was too be expected.
It's your first time this is too hard to master at once practise this alot and in a few weeks you can do this.
*Meanwhile*
Celine had killed the commanders in the house.
Celine: hmp a 14 year old girl kills these commanders easily.
they were soo weak.
and she returned too her ship and too Devil.
while she came walking into Devil's room and she went too sit on her knees.
Devil: the commanders are death?
Celine: yes my master.
Devil: my spies have found another Rebel.
Julia is far more powerfull then you.
Devil: I do not expect you too survive.
but if you destroy him you will be one step closer too your goal.
Celine; taking Bryan's place?
Devil: yes you are more powerfull then he is he should have been killed already.
Go after Julia you can find her in Africa good luck.
Celine: I will not fail you my master.
and she walked away

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Post by KazuyaFreak on Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:39 pm

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Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:40 pm

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Post by KazuyaFreak on Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:41 pm

kazamafan15 wrote:please do not spam

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Post by Admin on Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:42 pm

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Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:45 pm

KazuyaFreak wrote:
kazamafan15 wrote:please do not spam

You can't spam in making one comment Question
>3 just please ask for paul.
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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:02 am

CHAPTER 4: THE LAST HOPE?
Ichiro trained everyday for more then 12 hours.
after he found out that Devil was the strongest creature on earth.
He trained with his fighting skills his angel gene and with sword fighting.
Ling: come on Ichiro get some rest for a change.
Ichiro while still training.
Ichiro I can't mother Devil won't take a break until he has taken over the world.
Ling: well then then you won't be intrest too know that your father has arrived.
Ichiro: my father where is he?
Jin: I am here.
while Jin came walking out house.
Ichiro hey father and they hugged eachother.
Jin: what have I heard? have you been training alot
Ichiro: yes I just want too be like you.
Jin: well I think you are strong enough too come with us.
Ling: eh Jin I don't think that's such a good idea.
Jin: why not he's old and strong enough.
Ling: but he is stil a child.
Jin; that's why he's not going too do too dangerous things.
Ichiro: ahhh please mom????
Jin: I will promise you this sweety he will not get hurt.
Ling: well ok if he won't stay away for years just like you.
Jin: well don't worry about that it will only take about 2 months.
now go gather your stuff and don't take too mcuh with you and then we will be going.
and of course say good bye too your mother.
Ichiro: ok father.
Jin somehow felt happy when he heard him saying that.
Jin and Ling were talking together when Ichiro was away.
Jin: I will miss you hon.
and jin gave her a kiss.
Ling: I will miss you tooo.
they heard Ichiro comign of the stairs.
Jin: so are you ready too leave now?
Ichiro: just a few seconds please I still have too say goodbye too my mother.
Goodbye mother and he gave Ling a hug.
Ling: bye my son take care and let me hear of you.
Ichiro: I will bye bye.
and Jin + Ichiro left in the car.
Jin; now what I am about too tell you might sound strange or weird.
the reason why you could come with me is we need you too protect another Rebel.
her name is Julia and we know that Devil has sent someone too kill her.
Ichiro: and you want me too take care of that person?
Jin: of course not your staying with Julia.
I will take care of that person.
Ichiro; mmmmm.
Jin: we will be there soon enough.
Ichiro: okay.....
*after a few hours*
Jin: aha we have arrived.
Ichiro looked out the window from the car and saw a mansion.
Ichiro: does she live there?
Jin: hmm in that mansion? yes that's her home.
end of chapter 4

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Post by KM_Lord on Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:03 am

Very good reading!!!great work Kazamafan... Cool

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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 9:04 am

KM_Lord wrote:Very good reading!!!great work Kazamafan... Cool
thank you very much KM_Lord

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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:32 am

from now on I will post previews from chapters before I post the full one.
Preview chapter 5
this chapter will be about the battle of Ichiro vs Celine.
they will find eachother and the winner will be alive but the loser?
What will happen too him/her?
Jin will have a big rule aswell as Julia..
tomorrow will the full chapter be on

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Post by KM_Lord on Tue Aug 04, 2009 2:59 pm

can´t wait... Cool

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CHAPTER 5 ICHIRO VS CELINE
Julia finally you two arrived.
Jin: it was a long journey..
Ichiro: I would have rather gone with the Helicopter...
Jin: Ichiro you know that's too dangerous.
Ichiro: yes but still.
Julia: anyway I have prepared some food if you two would like some?
Jin and Ichiro OF COURSE!
and they went inside.
*The Next day*
Jin Julia and Ichiro went too the forest.
Jin jumped into a lake.
Jin: hey look here it's a snake!
Julia:ieuw
Ichiro: haha can I come too???
Jin: yes but be carefull.
Ichiro jumped into the lake....
they both played in the water as father and son.
Julia jumped into the lake a few minuts later then Ichiro.
at that moment...
Jin: I can sense it.........
Ichiro: what can you sense father???
Jin she's here close by.
Julia: who's close by?
Jin; the servent from Devil who was sent too kill you.
strange for a young girl she is very strong with the Devil gene.
Ichiro: like I am with the Angel gene?
Jin: something like that.
we should hurry inside.
they quickly went inside.
as they went inside the feeling went weaker..
Ichiro: I can sense it aswell.
it feels like she thing Julia lives somewere else.
Jin: it may seem like that but be on your guard.
you may never know.
Julia: somebody has too go too the city there isn't enough food left anymore.
Jin: I will go I can't let Ichiro or you go it's too dangerous + Ichiro doesn't know the way.
Julia gave Jin some money and a list.
julia: good luck Jin.
Jin: thank you Julia and son protect Julia will you.
Ichiro: I will father I will.
Jin was gone and Ichiro had a awfull feeling..
Ichiro: she is close I can feel it.
in the room beside him came noice...
Ichiro while running too the Room
Ichiro: JULIA HOLD ON I'M COMMING FOR YOU!
when he arrived he saw that he was already too late.
Celine had killed Julia..
Ichiro: nooo. and he looked at Julia then at Celine.
Celine: are you gonna look at me the hole day???
or are you going too run away?
it's your choice.
Ichiro: neither I will fight you
he knew his father said that he shouldn't do that but he had too for Julia...
Celine: if your not with me then you are my enemy...
Ichiro was considering he sensed that she was the girl with the strong Devil gene.
Ichiro: I will do what I must...
Celine: you will try!!
she jumped into the air and the two started too fight with there swords.
while fighting they went outside too the lake.
where Ichiro Julai and Jin were in earlier today.
Celine's weapon felt on the ground and Ichiro took his change
and took her throat....
almost he was able too kill but yet.....
she kicked on his back and Ichiro felt on the ground.....
then Celine took her weapon and tried too split Ichiro in half with it....
Ichiro trained with this situation.
took his weapon with his feets and threw it too his hands.
and hold Celine back from killing him...
the two fought further....
with his powers he pushed Celine too the other side of the lake.
Ichiro: It's over Celine.
Celine: you underestimate the power of the Devil gene.
Ichiro: Don't try it!
Celine smiled and jumped too Ichiro.
with his sword he cut her feets off when she was about too land.
she felt almost in the water from that attack..
Celine Screamed of the pain..
Ichiro: you were the chosen one with me.
It was said that you would destroy Devil not join him!
Bring balance too the world not leave it in darkness!
while Celine was trying too come out of the water..
( the water had raised.)
Celine: I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
with a sad voice.
Ichiro turned around and he said.
Ichiro: you were my sister Celine..
I loved you...
the water was raising too fast for Celine too get out in time..
Ichiro walked away with her and his sword. hoping that she would be saved from the Devil gene.
when arrived at home..
he saw that his father was back...
Jin was looking at Julia..
Jin: I don't know what too say...
Ichiro: pfff she was killed by that girl....
Jin: where is she now?
Ichiro she is death. I killed her.
she is in the lake.....
Jin went too the lake with Ichiro....
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Great, great,great,great,great!

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KM_Lord wrote:perfect as always... applause applause

Admin wrote:Great, great,great,great,great!
thank you both.
alternate ending for Chapter 5 Ichiro vs Celine.
this ending would happen if Celine won the fight.
but the other ending (where Ichiro won is the true ending)
Ichiro: It's over Celine.
Celine: you underestimate the power of the Devil gene.
Ichiro: Don't try it!
Celine smiled and jumped too Ichiro.
Ichiro took his sword but he was too late..
Celine had already jumped and was standing behind him.
she used here weapon too stab Ichiro trough the heart.
Ichiro felt death on the ground..
after that Celine kicked Ichiro in the lake...
she stared at the lake for a few minuts and then she walked away..
her mission was done..
she returned too G Corporation.
she saw Devil standing with Bryan before the doors.
Celine: What is this?
Devil: Celine kill him..
that will be your last mission.
Celine looked at Devil and then at Bryan.
Celine: I am sorry Bryan.
she took her sword.
Bryan did the same.
they started too fight but it was hopeless for Bryan Celine was too strong with the Devil Gene.
Celine killed Bryan after he went on his knees
Devil laughed..
welll done Celine

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KM_Lord wrote:AWESOME!!!
I'm glad that you like it.
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