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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Aug 11, 2009 12:51 pm

preview chapter 6 the revenge of devil.
in this chapter we will read that Ichiro and Jin find Celine and are going to save her from the death.
meanwhile Devil senses that Celine had killed Julia but was defeated after that by a boy..
you can read more tomorrow

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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Aug 15, 2009 1:34 pm

CHAPTER 6 THE REVENGE OF DEVIL?
While returning to the real world.
she found her self tied up on a she didn't know what it was sort an of table??
Celine: aaaaaaaaaaghhhhhhhhh.
YOU! YOU KILLED ME!
she saw Ichiro standing before her.
Ichiro: No you forced me to fight you and that's why you ended up like this.
Celine: ugh wait until G corporation finds me.
Ichiro: they have been lying to you. The Commander (your father)
never wanted to kill you. and about your mother she is just fighting for our freedom.
Celine: I don't believe YOU!
Ichiro: then listen to your mother.
Celine: my mother?
and she saw a women coming in the room.
Celine: l... Lili?
Lili: yes Celine it's me.
It's all true what he said Celine.
Devil has been lying to you every day since day 1.
how could Devil do this to a young girl.
Jin came running into the room.
Jin: glad that your awake.
now we repaired your feets aswell.
you just look like you always did.
Celine finally realised the truth.
Celine: so he lied too me followed that I killed Rebels for him?
Jin and Lili looked at each other.
Lili: I am afraid so....
Celine how can I be so stupid!!
Jin: Celine you are only a 13 year old girl.
you can't blame your self.
but the worst part is.
Devil knows that your stil alive.
he lost his best Servant.
it might be possible that he will send some soldiers to look for you here.
and that is what happend.
I saw 4 soldiers walking around the city today.
we should go.
It's no longer save here.
Ichiro: but father where should we go.
Jin: first to your mother.
he took a breath.
gather your stuff were leaving tonight!
Celine: wait! what about me?
Jin: your coming with us I got some clothes for you.
take them and come in two hours outside.
*after two hours*
Jin: good you are all here.
now go into the car we don't have any time to lose.
Meanwhile at the G corporation.
Officer: Devil we stil haven't found her yet.
the change is big that she has been killed.
Devil: NO I sense that she is alive you guys have just been looking in the wrong place.
she already left.
but I've send a surpise for her. hehe
*back in the car with Jin Ichiro Lili and Celine*
Ichiro: father I saw a strange light outside moving very fast.
it seems to be following us.
Jin stopped the car.
and he waited a few minuts.
A strange looking creature jumped before there car.
Jin Ichiro Lili and Celine came out the car
the moment they came out the car the creature which appeared to be a Werewolv
he attacked Celine (tried to kill her)
Jin: I knew it he has been sent to eleminate Celine.
He tried to attack the creature.
but the moment he tried to attack he was already gone.
Ichiro: how can we stop him when he is so fast?
the werewolf attacked Ichiro.
Jin: Ichiro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
however Ichiro manadged to hold the werewolf back.
and defeated him by using his Sword.
Ichiro: let's go.
and they went to Ichiro's mother.

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:29 pm

want me too stil continue it? I have a feeling that you guys don't like it anymore

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by jeswd on Fri Aug 21, 2009 1:39 pm

Of course you continue it! It's great! ^^ I'm just too lazy to post all the time. Razz
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:15 pm

Chapter 7 (Bonus Chapter) The German party
this chapter will take place after a battle in germany between the Rebels(soldiers) and G Corporation.
the Rebels won of course.
also here and there there might be some German to make it look more realistic but I Might post English translations later
also this will be a short chapter as this is a Bonus Chapter and isn't really important.

Ichiro: were are we going to Dad?
Jin: didn't I told you?
we are going to a Party!
They had to travel a few days before they arrived in Germany.
Lili Jin Ling Ichiro and Celine were invited for the party because people thought they were the last hope.
finally they arrived in Germany Berlin
Celine: is it here?
This place looks awesome!!
meanwhile a soldier came walking to there car.
soldier: Kann ich Ihre Einladung?
Lili Ling Ichiro and Celine didn't understand German so........
Jin saw the look on there faces
Jin: he said, May I have your invitation?
Jin gave the invitation to the Soldier.
The Soldier gave it back to Jin
Jin: Danke(Thank you)
and they went further.
Later that evening.
the girls and boys from the rebels arrived at the Party.
apparantly you could do more then just Dance and have something to eat.
you could also watch a movie.
and drink (of course)
Jin walked to the place where people were sitting before the Television.
Jin:which Movie is this?
guy: this movie? it's called Zwartboek= Dutch and it means Blackbook
this actress her name is Carice van houten.
Jin: okay and he walked away.
Ichiro came running too Jin
Ichiro: Dad Celine is flirting with some Guys.
Jin; oh my let her she is getting old enough.
besides she is Lili's daughter not mine.
Ichiro: but but.....
Jin: your in love with her right?
Ichiro looked at the ground.
with a sad voice
Ichiro: yes dad.
Jin: you should tell her.
go go else she will get a different BF.
and Ichiro walked to Celine and told her his feelings.
I told you guys this would be short

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:45 am

Preview chapter 8 mother and son
in this chapter Ling and Ichiro will have a massive fight with Devil
while Jin and Celine are having troubles at home with Lili.
also (for Jeswd) Ling will be an important character in this chapter
and I can confirm there will be dying another Rebel

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Aug 26, 2009 2:13 pm

Chapter 8 mother and son part 1
The Rebels have returned at home from the party in Germany.
and Ichiro finally told Celine the truth about his feelings for her.
after that they spent time together alone.(want to know about it?)
apparantly Celine had the same feelings about Ichiro.
it was a true love night between them Shocked

*back at home*
Jin: okay i know everyone is tired because of the party but tomorrow were heading too a temple.
Lili: why Jin???
Jin: I dunno I got this letter from someone I don't know
but anyway let's get all a goodnight sleep.
Goodnight everyone.
goodnight says everyone
*The Next day*
Everyone awakened and took there breakfast
Lili: ok let's go everyone.
Jin; not yet.
I want you me and Celine too stay here.
Lili and Celine: WHAT? WHY?
Jin: I don't thrust it.
hon Ichiro you two go please?
Ling: ok we will it would be good for Ichiro's fighting skills.
Jin: indeed it would be
take care you two!
Ichiro: thanks dad we will.
Ling: let's go Ichiro.
Ichiro: sure thing mom.
bye dad Lili and Celine.

they walked out house.
Ling: we will go by car I can't fly and your too young for the Helicopter.
Ichiro: ok mom.
they stept into the car and traveled for about 4 hours.
*after those 4 hours they arrived at The Temple*
Ling: close the door Ichiro.
I don't wanna get trouble with your father when the car is stolen.
now follow me please.
Ichiro: alright alright...
they walked too the temple....
but they didn't know what to do...
Ling: what to do now????
Soldier: finally you two arrived.
Jin already informed us that you two were coming here.
Ling and Ichiro were your names right?
Ling: yes that's our names.
Soldier: good names.
now follow us inside please if you would like.
meanwhile
another soldier came running to them.
Soldier: I stil haven't find the bathroom.
and I need to...
Captian: that's not possible.
all the bathrooms are broken..
Soldier: but sir I really need to.
another soldier said me too sir.
the Captian asked his commander.
you also have to go too the Bathroom?
Commander: actually yes.
Captian; then go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
It's not mine bathroom.
*20 minutes later*
Captian: now are we finally done with going too the bathroom?
Soldiers: yes Sir.
Captian: Ok then Follow me inside.
and they walked inside.
just as they went inside.
the door went open.
everyone stared at the door.
and they saw a man standing there.
Ling: It's Devil.
Captian: we will take the long way.
The Soldiers went away
Ling Ichiro started to fight against devil.
which wasn't easy he was much more powerfull then both.
They came in a large room and as soon as they came in there Devil kicked Ichiro in the face which caused him too fall on the stairs.
Meanwhile The fight lasted with Devil Vs Ling.
Ichiro came back at his feeds and ran too his mother.
thing's weren't going in Ling's favour Devil took her weapon.
at that moment Devil saw his change.
Ichiro came running too them.
Ichiro: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Devil had stabbed Ling with her own weapon.
Ichiro was left alone in the fight with Devil.
Be continued.

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by x-jun--asuka-x on Thu Aug 27, 2009 1:28 pm

hello=)i have me too a fanfic about tekken but it's in french =(
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:05 pm

I have a minor understanding from French

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by jeswd on Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:53 am

What? AWESOME!

I think I should do own too ;P
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:51 am

jeswd wrote:What? AWESOME!

I think I should do own too ;P
own?? you one?

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by jeswd on Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:01 am

Yes, my own.
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:02 am

Okay then.
Preview Chapter 9 Mother and son part 2
I won't reveal alot about this chapter only that the fight with Devil will continue and we shall see an old character again

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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:14 am

I've decided to keep this chapter short.
enjoy
Chapter 9: mother and son part 2

*In the Temple*
Ichiro was staring at his mother and then at Devil.
Devil was smiling.
He knew that without his mother he was afraid of him.
Ichiro took his sword.
and be begon to attack Devil.
Devil: your anger has made you powerfull boy.
Ichiro was full of rage..
he broke Devil's sword in two pieces.
followed by a kick in his face.
Devil felt on the ground.
Ichiro pointed his sword at Devil.
Ichiro: it's game over for you!
Devil: you are even stronger then we thought.
Ichiro stil pointing his sword at devil.
what's that supposed to mean?
Devil: you'll find out soon enough.
and he dissapeared right before Ichiro's eyes.
Ichiro let his word fall on the ground and ran to his mother.
He took her in his arms.
Ling: It's too late.
Ichiro; NOOOOOO mom
Ling: Ichiro promise me that you will defeat him.
Ichiro: I promise mother.
with a sad voice.
Ling: Leave me behind.
Ichiro: no I got to save you.
Ling: you already have.
and those were her last words.
Ichiro: I won't leave YOU!!!!!
but it was too late his mother was already dead.
Ichiro: mom?
noooooooooooooooooooo
he was crying. before his dead mother.
a dew seconds later a bright white light appeared behind him.
???:you can't do anything for her.
Ichiro turned around.
Who are you?
???: I'm your grandmother.
Ichiro: is it you Jun?
Jun: yes it's me.
Ichiro: but you dyed about uhm 15/16 years ago?
Jun: yes it's true I am death.
however I can stil appear as ghost.
Ichiro: so your saying.
your from the ghost world?
Jun: yes your mother is there aswell.
but not everyone can appear right after there death.
it might take some days.
now go home and tell your father the truth.
Ichiro: okay I will thank you.
however Jun was already gone.

*back at home*
Jin saw his son before his house.
He ran too him.
Jin: what happend?
and where is your mother?
Ichiro: she... she has been killed by DEVIL!
Jin: NOOOO
that can't be..
He will pay for what he has done!!

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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Sep 02, 2009 6:42 am

Preview chapter 10 Jin's new love.
in this chapter we will meet Jin's new love.
but there won't happen alot

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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:00 pm

In this chapter I'll introduce new characters and also some Tekken characters might come back.
Chapter 10 Jin's new love
*At the base*
Jin and the other members of the rebel alliance and some normal Soldiers had planned a meeting today at 12:00am
Captian: ah there you are Jin.
Jin: shall I start the meeting Captian?
Captian: we still await the arrivel of our special guest.
however you may proceed Jin.
Jin: As you wish.
we found some old letters.
if we guessed right.
this could mean we found a base.
we don't have much time.....
Jin stopped talking.
He saw a young beautiful girl standing there
Captian: ah there you are Alisa.
Alisa: please excuse my lateness.
Captian: No matter we just started.
Jin this is Alisa she'll be your newest Rebel.
Alisa: I look forward to be working with you Jin.
Jin: Your beautiful!!! Embarassed
Alisa stared at Jin.
Captian: eh Jin?????
Jin: what oh I'm not feeling well.

*Jin's new home*
Ichiro and Celine were just speaking too Lili.
when they heard gun shots outside.
Ichiro: what is that?
The three ran outside.
it looked like som people where shooting at some soldiers.
Seven people against 70 soldiers isn't really Fair told Ichiro to him self.
He took his sword.
He jumped too the soldiers and killed them one by one.
Lili: ugh he's just like his father..
Ichiro: now there finished.
and what were you guys doing all alone?
Three of the guys told there names the other 4 ran away.
The first one was called Jason and was 19 years old He was from the USA.
the second was another male his name was Chris 18 years old and from Belgium
the third one appeared too be a female her name was Ada she was 17 years old.
Chris: what do you think we were doing?
Fighting for our rights!!!
Ada: oh by the way thanks for saving our lifes.
Ichiro: it's no problem..
End Chapter 10

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Post by jeswd on Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:47 am

Alisa! <3
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Post by kazamafan15 on Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:03 am

jeswd wrote:Alisa! <3
I knew you would like it

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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Sep 12, 2009 5:45 am

Preview chapter 11 Training.
In this chapter we'll see Ichiro getting special training.
also I will go further with Jin and Alisa.
then she tells Jin the truth.
I hope it will go alright with Jin then

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Post by kazamafan15 on Mon Sep 14, 2009 9:28 am

Chapter 11 Training.
Last night Jin sent Ichiro to special training too learn more about his powers and fighting style.
In the mean time Jin thought about his time with Alisa.
eventough it was only working.
Alisa: Jin it was fun today but I got too tell you something.
Jin: really? what is it?
He was hoping that she would like him aswell
Alisa: I saw that you love me.
but I am not a Human girl.
Jin: you are not???
Alisa: yes but i still like you.
I just want too be a normal girl like Celine.
Jin: I know you want and that's why i stil love you.
Alisa Smiled

*Ichiro arrived*
It was a strange home..
the place where his father killed Ogre many years ago.
Strange place for a training I have too say.
told Ichiro too him self.
He came inside.
Welcome too my home or what is left of it.
Ichiro: who are you?
I'm your master.
he saw someone walking too him.
Ichiro: it's you my.....
???: that's right my name is Kazuya Mishima
Ichiro: but he is what like 90 years old?
Kazuya: I was saved so I look like still like back in the days of The King of Iron fist Tournament 6
Ichiro: you are the one who want too train me.
Kazuya: yes I will learn you old moves.
and I know how your power works.

The End of chapter 11

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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:10 pm

*Note I will put a break for two weeks on this Fanfic as I have more todo

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:21 pm

*News*
after chapter 11 I am gonna put a break.
that is because I want too Translate my other Fanfic and this one into Dutch.
don't worry I will stil post those so you now when I will be putting new chapters on.
also for example.
The Dutch version will be posted two days before the English version alright?

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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:07 am

Preview chapter 12: death
Kazuya to Ichiro
Kazuya: I don't care what happens too the rebels as long as G Corporation will be DESTROYED!!
Kazuya and Bryan
Bryan: I am afraid I can't let you do that.
Kazuya: I have waited many years to kill the real Bryan.

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Post by Admin on Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:36 am

I really need to read all the chapters I missed!

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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:49 am

Admin wrote:I really need to read all the chapters I missed!
hehe you still have 1 week before I post the full new chapter

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