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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:03 pm

Finally the new chapter
Chapter 12: Death
In the temple
Ichiro's training has come to an end.
Kazuya was very proud of Ichiro.
He even managed to learn everything faster then he did.
Normally he would have hated it but times had changed.
*A few minuts later*
Ichiro got on his knees.
Kazuya: Congratulations boy you have succeeded my training.
Ichiro: so am I now a Rebel?
Kazuya laughed.
Kazuya: No you must Face Devil one more time.
and try to defeat him then the world will be saved.
Ichiro: if you hate the G corporation so much then why aren't you a Rebel?
Kazuya stared at his Grandson.
Kazuya: Let's just say I despise G corporation.
Ichiro stopped asking his Grandfather questions.
Kazuya: now you must leave I'm sure your father is missing you.
Ichiro: thank you but what about you?
Kazuya: I will do fine.
I don't care what happens too the Rebels as long G corporation is destroyed!
now just go and forget me
With a sad fave Ichiro walked away it was strange Ichiro was one of the few who actually liked Kazuya.

*back at home*
Ichiro came running to his home.
Ichiro: father father I AM BACK!!
Jin: hmpf what was that?
and he looked outside.
Ichiro??
Jin: guys Ichiro is back!!
Lili Jin and Celine ran outside.
Lili and Jin hugged Ichiro
and Celine even gave him a Kiss
Ichiro felt his head getting red.

*At the temple*
Kazuya heard people comming towards him.
He turned too the other side.
Kazuya: Bryan Anna?
Bryan/Anna: Kazuya.
Kazuya: I'm disapointed in you Anna that you serve Devil now.
anna and Bryan attacked Kazuya Instantly
kazuya: two against one isn't fair!
He Dodges there attack.
Kazuya Killed them both easily.
After the fight.
Kazuya: is this it?
the most powerfull Members of G corporation.
He threw them both off the temple.
Two less to worry about he told his self.

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:02 pm

Shocked gets popcorn and waits for the next chapter*

Very good!!!
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:13 pm

greekman wrote:Shocked gets popcorn and waits for the next chapter*

Very good!!!
thank you

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:51 pm

Preview chapter 13: The Devil Gene awakens
Jun and Ling protected Jin from Evil but now they are gone who is protecting Jin?
Ichiro: you are not my father anymore.
Jin: then there's nothing holding me back by destroying you.

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:53 pm

interestin!! can't wait
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:02 pm

Thank you.
I also can confirm that this 'Devil' is not the one from Tekken 2 and TTT

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:55 am

Chapter 13: The Devil gene awakens.
*At Jin's house*
Ichiro got out of bed and as usual he went to his father's room but only finding his bed to be empty.
Ichiro: where is my father.
he told to him self.
He ran downstairs.
Ichiro: Lili where is my father?
Lili: isn't he stil sleeping?
Ichiro: no his bed is empty.
Lili got worried.
Lili: he didn't came home last night.
But why?
Ichiro: I fear for his life.
Celine: what are you saying?
Ichiro saw Celine coming downstairs.
Ichiro: Jin didn't came home last night and I said that I fear for his life.
Celine: impossible Jin is the strongest of us I'm sure he's alright.
At that moment someone knocked at the door.
Ichiro: who is there?
and he was hoping that it would be his father.
Kazuya: It's me your grandfather.
Please open the door.
Ichiro opened the door for Kazuya.
Kazuya: sorry I came so early in the morning.
But I have some news about your father Ichiro.
Lili: JIN! is he alright.
Kazuya looked at the other side.
Kazuya: I am not sure how to tell this.
Celine: what what is it?
Kazuya: Jin has turned into a Devil.
I saw it myself he killed citizens.
Ichiro Celine and Lili couldn't believe what they where hearing.
Ichiro: my father would never do such things.
Kazuya: It's not your father he is now Devil Jin.
I didn't believe this day would come again.
without your mother and Grandmother there is nobody left to protect Jin from the Devil Gene.
and I am afraid there is only one solution to save Jin.
Ichiro+Celine: and what is that?
Kazuya: Killing Devil Jin then his spirit is free to go.
Ichiro was crying he couldn't kill his father.
Could he?
Celine: Where is he now?
Kazuya: hmph He's in the USA.
Ichiro we have to finish him.
before he is to dangerous.
Ichiro: Ok then I'll follow you.
Celine and Lili: Be carefull.

*USA*
Kazuya: just follow me.
Ichiro: I will
they looked all around the country and at last they found him.
Devil Jin flew above there heads attacking them in the air.
Kazuya: watch OUT and he pushed Ichiro the other side.
Devil Jin: what are you two doing here?
Ichiro: What is happening to you?
Devil Jin: You will not take him from me father.
Kazuya: look at what you have done with him.
He is almost dead thanks to you.
Devil Jin: now your against me and I hate people who are against me.
now Prepare to taste my wrath.
Kazuya: I will do what I must to protect him.
and the two started to fight but it was hopeless Devil Jin was much more powerfull then Kazuya.
That caused Kazuya his life.
Devil Jin used all of his power to let the eart Tremble enough to kill Kazuya.
Devil Jin: I have been Dreaming about this for years.
and He flew away.
Kazuya was dead and Ichiro was Injured.
What was going to happen now?

Jin's destiny is sealed he will now forever be Devil Jin
Devil Jin realised he lost everything and the world will soon feel his wrath.
This Conflict is terrible.
and the pain is unbearable for Ichiro Celine and Lili.
Each of them has chosen a different path.
It's hard to choose the right path when you know You could lose your life.
It's difficult to see the future as the Devil Gene now Controls the world.
A new servent has rised to serve Devil.
They will rule for years until one day a new hope will rise to save the world.
And Jun she is crying in heaven for her son

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by Marco331 on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:12 am

I Read all your chapters!And I can say only one : That´s gerat!You are very good writer!
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Tue Oct 06, 2009 1:57 am

very good chapter Shocked Shocked

10/5 Very Happy
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:50 am

Thank you both.
yes since this isn't part of the story I call it like this.
Now we are 4 years in the future at this time Ichiro is at the same age as his father was back at The King of Iron Fist Tournament 3
Chapter 13.5: Story explaining
The entire world has been taken over by the G corporation
And The USA was gone.
*Ichiro and Alisa*
Ichiro and Alisa have both joined the AGC (Anti G corporation)
They are one of the 3 Rebels left.
Ichiro is one of the most powerfull Soldiers of the AGC and he gets Alot of times Missions.
Alisa has been helping Ichiro with his missions.

*Celine and Lili*
Celine escaped to Europe to help The country's which had taken massive damage.
She was captured and taken to a Prison.
Lili dyed Two years ago from an accident.
*Devil Jin*
Now Jin is gone devil Jin took his place.
He took the place of Bryan at the side of Devil

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:18 pm

Dude your Fan fiction Rocks!!! gives 1L beer bottle*

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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:25 pm

greekman wrote:Dude your Fan fiction Rocks!!! gives 1L beer bottle*

Very Happy
That tastes good LOL
Thank you very much

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Post by greekman on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:33 pm

You're welcome lool

damn one day if you come here or i go there we're going to the pub Very Happy
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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:35 pm

haha but I have to be a year older
yeah I know in most countrys its 18 but here its 16

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Post by greekman on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:43 pm

Mine is 16 too (but i drink since 14)

my fav drink when i was 14 was Vodka! and it still is... Very Happy
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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:44 pm

greekman wrote:Mine is 16 too (but i drink since 14)

my fav drink when i was 14 was Vodka! and it still is... Very Happy
Vodka sounds mmmmm

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:47 pm

kazamafan15 wrote:
greekman wrote:Mine is 16 too (but i drink since 14)

my fav drink when i was 14 was Vodka! and it still is... Very Happy
Vodka sounds mmmmm

All this talk talk made me thirsty loool
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:51 pm

greekman wrote:
kazamafan15 wrote:
greekman wrote:Mine is 16 too (but i drink since 14)

my fav drink when i was 14 was Vodka! and it still is... Very Happy
Vodka sounds mmmmm

All this talk talk made me thirsty loool
lol me to

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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:58 am

Chapter 14 The new hope
Ichiro and Alisa had Received new orders to go to Japan and Kill Devil Jin.
But before that they had to save Celine from the Prison guards.
However saving Celine wasn't any trouble but killing Devil Jin that was difficult.
Even more for Ichiro because he knew that he should do it.
Alisa and Celine where no match for Devil Jin.
and even Ichiro might have problems with him.

*On the road*
Celine: Ichiro are you alright?
Ichiro: hm? I'm just thinking about my father.
It's hard to kill my own father.
As Jun said in my vision.
''You are our last hope and the only thing you need to do is destroy Devil and Devil Jin
Then the world would be saved''
Celine: Judging by that Jun (you're grandmother) must have a connection if she knows so much about the future and the Devil gene.
Ichiro: that's true Jin told me one time
''my mother had the Angel gene and so do you''
from there I have these special powers.
But we shouldn't stay here let's keep going.
Celine: okay okay.
Alisa came flying towards them.
Alisa: Ichiro you told me to do something with my clothes right?
Ichiro: yes and what did you do?
Alisa: I bought this beautiful dress.
Celine: you will never get me into that.
Ichiro laughed
Ichiro: it looks beautiful on you Alisa.
Alisa: you really think so?
Ichiro: yeah it's a good one.
Don't worry Celine you don't have to buy one.
Celine: pffff
Ichiro: I already bought one for you.
Celine: no way I am not wearing a dress do you hear me?
Ichiro: yeah I hear you and I was just joking.
Celine smiled.

*G Corporation*
Finally Alisa Ichiro and Celine arrived.
Alisa: alright I will put this dress on to distract them.
then I finish them off with my chainsaws.
Ichiro: okay good idea.
Alisa walked to the soldiers.
Soldiers: WHAT A PRETY GIRL!!
will you walk with us maybe we can help you?
Alisa: do we really have to do this?
Soldiers: well we can help you then follow us please.
Alisa: ok I will.
Alisa walked with the soldiers inside.
But it went totally different then the Soldiers thought.
The soldiers got killed one by one.
Ichiro: alright that's our sign Let's get inside.

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Wed Oct 07, 2009 1:19 pm

So exciting!!! can't wait... Breaks a chair because of all excitement* Shocked
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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:12 am

hmm I see not much intrest

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Post by Admin on Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:24 am

kazamafan15 wrote:hmm I see not much intrest

I read every chapter!

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Post by KM_Lord on Sat Oct 10, 2009 7:41 am

Admin wrote:
kazamafan15 wrote:hmm I see not much intrest

I read every chapter!

me too!!!

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Oct 10, 2009 11:43 am

wow I didn't know that

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