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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Oct 10, 2009 1:50 pm

chapter 15: father vs son
Alisa: finally you two got in.
Ichiro: why finally? we came as fast as we could!
Alisa; ug these soldiers wanted to know what was under my dress these perverts.
Celine: good that I didn't wear it then.
Alisa and Ichiro ignored her.
Alisa: I've heard that your father Ichiro is on the upper floor.
BE PREPARED!
He's stronger then ever.
atleast that's what I heard from the soldiers.
Ichiro felt irritated.
Ichiro: please don't tell me that.
Alisa; oh I am sorry
Ichiro: don't worry about it.
now let's finish this once and for all.
Celine and alisa: YEAH!!
Ichiro and the two girls took the stairs.
Ichiro: ok I will go to left and you to right ok?
Alisa: alright and be carefull Ichiro.
Ichiro: I will and you two too.

*Left*
Except for some soldiers there wasn't much intresting at the left side.
However Ichiro still didn't checked all the rooms.
Ichiro: is this everything?
How boring this place is.
I WANT ACTION!
He heard Someone screaming.
Ichiro: finally some action.

*Right*
That scream was from Celine.
They found Devil Jin.
Alisa and Celine attacked Devil Jin the moment they saw him.
but the two together were no match for Devil Jin.
Devil kicked them Unconscious.
A few seconds later Ichiro came walking into the room.
Ichiro: It is you father.
Devil Jin: you have seen to much.
He fired a Inferno at Ichiro but Ichiro just send it back at him.
Devil Jin: this isn't possible.
Ichiro: it is but you just still have much to learn about my powers.
Devil Jin: Ugh.
we can only end this fight with our Fighting skills.
Devil Jin attacked Ichiro with ''Heaven door''
but Ichiro was prepared for that attack.
He took his father's arms and threw him at the ground.
Then ending it with a kick from above.
Devil Jin: awwww
as he was trying to get up on his feet he said.
Devil Jin: I'm refusing to give up.
with his last breath he attacked his son but it was over!.
Ichiro had already prodicted this.
He used a ''somersault'' attacked on Devil Jin.
That caused Devil Jin to lose the battle.
But he was at the point of losing his life.
Ichiro saw a gun lying on the table.
he took it and pointed it at his father.
Ichiro: goodbye father I will miss you.
He shot at every vital point of Devil Jin's body
Devil Jin was dead.
But what Ichiro didn't know was that his greatest battle had yet to come!

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Sun Oct 11, 2009 8:32 am

did anyone see it?

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by jeswd on Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:04 am

Me! Wink Gotta say you're very good! How much do you use time to it?
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:15 am

jeswd wrote:Me! Wink Gotta say you're very good! How much do you use time to it?
A few days when i have posted my newest chapter I will begin with another one

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by KM_Lord on Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:35 am

kazamafan15 wrote:did anyone see it?

yes!!!I just read this chapter!!!It´s really good!!!

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:39 am

KM_Lord wrote:
kazamafan15 wrote:did anyone see it?

yes!!!I just read this chapter!!!It´s really good!!!
Thank you KM_Lord and Jeswd

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by jeswd on Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:18 am

kazamafan15 wrote:
jeswd wrote:Me! Wink Gotta say you're very good! How much do you use time to it?
A few days when i have posted my newest chapter I will begin with another one
Wow! Btw, I should do my fan fic very soon before Tekken 6 comes out because then I won't be doing it... Razz
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:40 am

woooooh Shocked i loved it

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Mon Oct 12, 2009 7:58 am

Preview chapter 16: Ultimate showdown
Ichiro: someone has to stop him!
and if the AGC soldiers won't do it then I will!

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:47 am

uuuhhh can`t wait Very Happy
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:06 pm

greekman wrote:uuuhhh can`t wait Very Happy
thanks man

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:08 pm

your welcome!! Very Happy
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by Marco331 on Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:52 pm

very good!This is my favourite reading!
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Oct 13, 2009 2:37 pm

Chapter 16: Ultimate showdown
*At G corporation*
Ichiro had defeated Devil Jin in a life-death battle.
But for him that wasn't enough.
Devil was still alive and Ichiro wanted to have revenge for 4 years since Devil killed his mother.
Then Ichiro heard what he was hoping for.
Ichiro: Are you two alright?
Celine and Alisa: yes we are all alright.
Celine saw Devil Jin.
Celine: you've did it you killed Devil Jin.
Alisa: I'm impressed.
Even I couldn't defeat him in the King of iron fist tournament 6.
Ichiro smiled.
Ichiro: you're strong but not strong enough for my father.
at that moment they heard an evil smile trough out the building.
Ichiro: It's him..
Alisa: y..o..u sure?
Ichiro: for 100%
Ichiro ran for the nearest stairs to the roof.
Celine and Alisa; hey wait for us!
But Ichiro didn't want to hear it.

*At the roof*
Ichiro opened the door and saw Devil standing for him.
Devil: I've been waiting for you.
I saw that you killed your father?
Brilliant I remember the time I killed you're mother and making you're father my slave.
I've enjoyed that time.
Ichiro: this is for my parents!!
He attacked Devil from the air.
Devil: Impressive.
He dodged his attack.
Devil: but this is how you should perform that attack.
and he flew in the air and did the same move.
Ichiro grabbed his feet.
Devil: most impressive But stupid.
He fired a Inferno blast at Ichiro.
Ichiro flew a few metres back.
Devil: perhaps you're not as strong as you're father thought.
Ichiro: oh yeah then watch this.
he jumped at Devil's shoulders and he threw him on the ground.
Devil: aargh You are strong I give you that much.
Ichiro used his father's ''Electric Wind Hook Fist'' attack.
followed by a ''Soul Rage Lunging Low Roundhouse Kick''
Devil: enough.
He saw a last change to kill Ichiro.
Devil fired a Inferno at the Lamppost causing a small explosion.
However Devil couldn't escape the explosion aswell.
Alisa With Celine holding her leg came flying on the roof.
Celine: wow this was one hell of a battle.
But did Ichiro do his job?
Alisa: no it looks like Devil is getting up again.
Devil: arg I never dreamed to be defeated by a human and whatever you are.
You two are no match for me.
Prepare to face you're doom!
Ichiro: That remains to be seen.
Devil: But.... how did you sur..vive?
Ichiro: I already lost my family at you're hands and it won't happen again.
This is for my mother and father.
He broke Devil's wings and pushed him off the roof.
Ichiro: I've envenged my parents.
Alisa: we're going home guys!
Celine: finally this just isn't good for my skin.
Ichiro: Hello babies. *kiss* daddy missed you *kiss* yeah he did *kiss*
did you miss me? *kiss* did you?
Celine: Babies? what is he talking about?
Alisa: He must mean those snacks he's been saving for a long time.
Celine: looking at Ichiro you wouldn't guess he just came away from a Life and death situation.
Ichiro: huh did you say something about me?
What's taking so long you two? come on let's go home and Celebrate it.
But yet something happend what they wouldn't know for years.

*At the ground by G corporation*
An arm raises from the trash and hoping to kill his Sworn enemy's

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by greekman on Wed Oct 14, 2009 2:04 am

Very good applause applause
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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by KM_Lord on Wed Oct 14, 2009 6:57 am

greekman wrote:Very good applause applause

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:53 am

Thank you greekman and KM_Lord

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by Admin on Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:59 am

Amazing

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:18 am

Admin wrote:Amazing
thank you

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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:39 pm

so do you all want more chapters?

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Post by Admin on Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:41 pm

kazamafan15 wrote:so do you all want more chapters?

Yes, definately!

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:43 pm

Eventough the main story has ended?

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Re: The Devil gene Unleashed

Post by kazamafan15 on Thu Oct 15, 2009 9:52 am

chapter 17: to the rescue (preview)
(The main story has ended so I decided to post chapters which aren't that Important to the story this chapter takes place between chapter 10 and 11)
In this chapter we will see Alisa and Celine on a Rescue mission

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Post by kazamafan15 on Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:50 pm

Chapter 17: to the rescue

*At jin's house*
Celine came walking in.
the first she noticed that her mother wasn't at home.
Celine: Hey where is my mother!
And uh who is that girl with pink hair??
Alisa: oh Excuse me but I am Alisa I am a friend of Jin.
Celine: Hi I'm Celine.
But where is my mother?
Jin and Alisa looked at each other........
Jin: well uhm don't get mad but your mother has been kidnapped by someone when we were gone.
Celine: NO!
And she ran out house.
Jin: Alisa will you take care of her and save Lili?
Alisa: Don't worry Jin I will.
and she followed Celine.
Alisa: Celine wait a moment for me.
How do you want to find your mother when you don't even know where she is??
Celine: I dunno.
Alisa: Here take my hand I know where your mother is let's fly together to Monaco.
Celine took her hand and together they flew to Monaco.

*Monaco*
Alisa Landed.
Alisa: pfff your heavy did you know that?
Celine got a little smile.
We don't have any time to waste.
Alisa: ok follow me.
It's not so far from here.
she is at her old home.
ah look there it is!
Celine: where? there is nothing.
Alisa: look at that old house or mansion.
Celine: is that it?
it looks deserted.
Alisa: you'll be suprised.
Once they got inside Celine realised Alisa was telling the truth.
Celine: wow it looks gigantic!!
Alisa: did you hear that scream?
Celine: it came from over there let's check it out!
Celine hoped it would be her mother and yes there she was.
Lili: Alisa and Celine?
Celine: Don't worry mom we will get you out of there.
Alisa: wait what's that noise?
Bryan ah what have we here intruders?
oh it's just 2 ladies who actually think they can defeat me.
He pointed a shotgun at Alisa.
Celine was so fast she kicked Bryan's gun out of his hands before he even realised.
Bryan: you'll pay for that!
But he was to slow Celine already knocked him out.
Alisa: Nice work.
you have some skill's little girl.
Lili: Great thanks my dear now let's go!

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Post by kazamafan15 on Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:32 am

did anyone read it?

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