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Post by greekman on Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:41 pm

Prologue: cene takes place in hwoarang´s ending in T5*

Hwoarang: Come on you stupid!
Devil jin: you will be the first to feel my wrath! now suffer!

hwoarang was defeated as easily as a child against a full grown man, Devil jin had no remorse and used "infinite power" to pierce trough hwoarang´s heart! as he fell on his knees heis last words were...

Hwoarang: damn you jin... Coughing blood*, i can´t die like this...

Jin then fainted exausted because of the usage of the devil gene, altough jin didn´t want his rivarly to end like that, he knew he had no choise...

End of prologue*

i´ll write chapter 1 soon
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Post by Admin on Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:05 am

Haha interesting! Can't wait!

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Post by jeswd on Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:21 am

^Same here. ; )
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Post by KM_Lord on Mon Aug 03, 2009 4:31 am

can´t wait too!!! Very Happy

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Post by greekman on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:11 am

Chapter 0: "the beggining of the darkness"

this chapter explains how the devil gene appeared (fan fic of course), it takes place in mediaval Japan, in a village...

the mishima village, home of the mishima clan was once a peacefull place were hard working people harvest every morning till sunset to have food to survive, although it´s a hard life they were happy untill...

a demon once attacked the village, and killed almost all the clan, very few survived, the demon left them live so they could work for him as his minions, and to take the women of the village. Severall years have passed untill Kenpachi mishima (note: kenpachi is a title given to the strongest warrior of their generation) became the village leader, he had enough with the demon´s cruelty and tyrany! so he decided to end this once and for all!
Kenpachi was known to have traveled all over japan and he learned almost all kinds of karate styles, so he developed a new style called karate mishima! he was very strong, there were rumors he wasn´t even human at all...
So one day he decided to face the demon, who they called shin (god), the demon had god like powers, and they thought no mortal could defeat him

One stormy night, kenpachi went to the demon´s den, to the showdown between the strongest human and the demon...

Kenpachi: So you´re shin, the powerfull demon who enslaved my people!
Shin: How dare you to come here! i shall make you an example and i´ll make you suffer all eternity

Sudentlly shin used, an energy attack but... kenpachi stoped the attack, shin was shocked, how could a HUMAN, stop that kind of attack...?

Kenpachi: now i shall avenge my family for what you done!

and an epic batlle started, shin realized that kenpachi was too strong in hand to hand combat, so he kept a distance and used his energy attacks, but kenpachi was fast and strong enough to avoid them

Shin: What are you?! those aren´t human movements, how can you be so strong??
kenpachi: my hatred maked me this strong, i shall destroy you, and finally we will live in peace!

kenpachi then punched the cave wall and giant boulders felled from the ceiling crushing shin and nailing him to the ground..

Kenpachi: Now this will be the final blow...

while kenpachi was raising his fist to deliver his final blow, shin in despair said!

Shin: You will pay human!!! since you´re so strong i´m gonna curse you for as long as your bloodline prevails!!

Shin Cuted his own body so that he could get out of the boulder and bit kenpachi in the neck!

Shin: now even if i´ll die you´ll become the thing you hate the most...

Shin disapeared in ashes and the virus of the demon began to infect Kenpachi´s DNA, turning him in the first devil...

he killed all the village, in his insanity leaving destruction and death everywere... and that´s how the nightmare of the mishima bloodline began...

chapter 1 coming soon*
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Post by Admin on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:22 am

Wow that was great, you added characters to explain the story, great! Very Happy

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Re: the lone wolf

Post by greekman on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:24 am

Admin wrote:Wow that was great, you added characters to explain the story, great! Very Happy

i´m just warming up Very Happy

thank you very much Very Happy
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Post by KM_Lord on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:41 am

Wow!!!good work applause

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Post by kazamafan15 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:50 am

chapter 0??????
okay well done oh and you used my way of talking?

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Post by greekman on Wed Aug 05, 2009 12:59 am

kazamafan15 wrote:chapter 0??????
okay well done oh and you used my way of talking?

chapter 0 because it isn´t inserted in the story timeline but it was necessary, (and fun too) so i can develop as much as i like now

well my narrating style was indeed influenced by yours, but i won´t use any of your story ideas, i have a lot of my own Smile
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Post by greekman on Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:01 am

KM_Lord wrote:Wow!!!good work applause

thank you Very Happy

i think you´ll like a lot the coming chapters... (implying something Wink Cool)
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Post by Drag-Pro on Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:37 am

Nice fanfic I like it, but I hate medieval times...They were so lame.
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by greekman on Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:38 am

Drag-Pro wrote:Nice fanfic I like it, but I hate medieval times...They were so lame.

it was just to explain how the devil gene appeared (in my fic of course)

btw thenk you Surprised
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Post by Drag-Pro on Wed Aug 05, 2009 1:39 am

greekman wrote:
Drag-Pro wrote:Nice fanfic I like it, but I hate medieval times...They were so lame.

it was just to explain how the devil gene appeared (in my fic of course)

btw thenk you Surprised

I know Smile
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Post by greekman on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:08 am

Chapter 1: Reincarnation

Takes place at G-corportaion HQ, inside the president room...

Soldier: Sir, excuse me. We found the corpse and retrieve it...
Kazuya: Good, let me see him

The soldier opened a human size bag and inside of it there was Hwoarang´s stone cold corpse...

Kazuya: this kid will be usefull, take him to the lab, and proceed as planned...

in the lab, they were examing hwoarang´s body...

Scientist 1: Sir, the tests are positive, the subject is compatyble with the nano-machines
Kazuya: Hmmm, interesting.... Start the program now! but... remove his memory and personality, it could be troublesome if he remembered who he was...
Scientist 2: Yes Sir!

so the scientists began to reconfigure hwoarang´s body, and with the nano-machines they enhanced hwoarang´s phisical performance...

Kazuya: Rise, my minion!
Hwoarang: Were am i? who am I? and who the hell are you?
Kazuya to scientist: i thought i told you to erase his personality as well...
Scientist 1: Sorry sir! we had some troub...

Kazuya grabed the head of the scientist and threw him to the wall

Kazuya: You are all useless!!
Hwoarang: answer me bastard! who the hell are you??

Hwoarang sudently jumped and he was almost striking kazuya when..

Hwoarang: HAAAAA!!!! what´s this?!
Kazuya: I´ve inserted a chip control in your head that controls your nano machines, they are the only thing that keep you alive, if you attack me they´ll attack your own body
Hwoarang: What do you want from me?
Kazuya: i want you to help me killing a man...
Hwoarang: What do i gain if i succeed?
Kazuya: Freedom...
Hwoarang: It´s a deal...

Meanwhile at Siberia military HQ...

Scientist 1: We found it! how to awaken the corpse whe found... we discovered that G-corporation developed a new technology
General: Dragunov, your mission is to infiltrate G-corporation and get that technology from them!
Dragunov: .........................
General: Now go!

Dragunov leaves the room

General: what kind of a creature is this?
Scientist: it has humanoid form, and part of the DNA is human... but we can´t decode the rest of the DNA, and we don´t have the power to awaken him, yet...

Chapter 2 cooming soon*
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Post by Admin on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:16 am

Great!!! 10/5 Very Happy

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Post by KM_Lord on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:17 am

wow very interesting!!! applause applause applause

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Post by greekman on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:18 am

Thank you all Domino, jergi!!! Smile
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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:52 am

greekman wrote:
kazamafan15 wrote:chapter 0??????
okay well done oh and you used my way of talking?

chapter 0 because it isn´t inserted in the story timeline but it was necessary, (and fun too) so i can develop as much as i like now

well my narrating style was indeed influenced by yours, but i won´t use any of your story ideas, i have a lot of my own Smile
oh that's good well done again

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Post by greekman on Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:22 am

Chapter 2: "The G-corporation captains"

G-corporation HQ...

Kazuya: Hwoarang! Come here!!
Hwoarang: I´m not your damn dog!!
Kazuya: You are untill you fulfill your missions
Hwoarang:.........
Kazuya: I have a mission for you...

Kazuya threw 2 lists to Hwoarang

Hwoarang: What the hell is this?
Kazuya: The list on your left hand, has the names and photos of fighters who i have interest... So i need you to capture them, the list that you have on your right hand, are hitmarks, by other words the ones who we must eliminate!
Hwoarang: How the hell am i gonna kill all of them?!
Kazuya: capture the ones on the other list first, then they´ll help you
Hwoarang: What are you gonna to do, to convince them to help a bastard like you?
Kazuya: it´s not of your concern maggot, now go!!

Hwoarang leaves the room and whispers...

Hwoarang: When i get this bloody chip out of my head, i´m gonna kick your teeth throuth your troat!

Hwoarang got to his new bike (harley of course) and went off to fulfill his mission. Meanwhile at the mishima zaibatsu...

Lars: Status report: we found interesting evidence that G-cor+poration is on the move what shall we do sir...?
Jin: That damned kazuya... We shall wait, but of course we will prepare ourselves....
Lars: understood sir
Jin: Lars!! how is the research developing?
Lars: not too good sir the scientists are having troubles, they say that a sample is needed...
Jin: i already gave that!!
Lars: Not from yourself... But from your father...
Jin: i see... Ok lars you are dismissed

Jin went to the lab to see with his own eyes what was the trouble...

Jin: How´s the cure developing?
Scientist: Sir we need a sample of kazuya´s DNA, if we don´t have it we can´t find a cure to erase the devil gene...
Jin: i´ll get it myself!!
Scientist: Sir you musn´t!! it´s too dangerous... there are rumors that Kazuya mishima is gathering certain individuals..
Jin:Hmf then i just need to gather some aswell... Lars!!...

G-corporation HQ down floor...

Soldier: We´re under attack!!! we need backup HAAAAAAAA...!
kazuya: what a pain in the a**, well it´s time to warm up a little...

kazuya runned to the 1st floor full of bloodlust and he wanted to take out the attack group by himself

Twisted Evil

After dispaching severall soldiers (including G-corporation one who were unlucky to get in his way...) he noticed a strong presence... it was Sergei Dragunov!!

Kazuya: Who the hell are you? what do you want?
Dragunov: ..........................
Kazuya: No one ignores me! you shall talk after i beat you to a pulp!

Kazuya jumped against Dragunov but he blocked, Kazuya with a vicious smile on his face, ducked and used "dragon uppercut" Dragunof flew through the window, landing inside of the lab (lucky). Dragunov saw a recipient that he knew it cointained the technology he needed, so he grabed it... but kazuya wasn´t going to let him escape, and he tried to use "right split kick" but dragunov taking advantage of the opening kicked kazuya in the neck, he was surprised he didn´t lost consious or even feel on his knees, still it gave him time to escape the G-corporation HQ. Kazuya went berserk, and killed everyone in the room, his chest scar was burning with hatred, and he said...

Kazuya: I will definetly kill them all, and conquer the world!! i´m the strongest !!


Meanwhyle hwoarang found his first fighter destined to be captured... it was Steve Fox!!!

Next chapter Hwoarang vs Steve fox
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Post by KM_Lord on Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:28 am

Cool!!!perfect!!! Kazuya and Hwoarang ruleeeez!!!

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Post by greekman on Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:30 am

KM_Lord wrote:Cool!!!perfect!!! Kazuya and Hwoarang ruleeeez!!!


thank you then you´ll love it the coming chapters
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Post by assassinNinaWilliams on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:06 am

OMG! I LOVE IT! CAN't wait for the next one ^^
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Post by greekman on Fri Aug 07, 2009 7:40 am

Chapter 3 (especial edition): "Hwoarang VS Steve Fox" & "The awakening..."


Hwoarang was riding his bike when he saw one of his targets on the list, it was Steve Fox the boxing prodigy...
Hwoarang stoped right by his feet, Steve surprised said...

Steve: Hwoarang what are you doing here?! there were rumors that you were killed
Hwoarang: I´m here to take you to the G-corporation, you will work for Kazuya mishima
Steve: Mishimas!!!! i HATE them!!! i won´t go
Hwoarang: Then i have no choise, what a pain in the a**...

Hwoarang jumped from the bike twisted his body in mid air and landed a kick in Steve´s head, but steve blocked with his left hand... Steve realizing he had a good shot right punched Hwoarang in the ribs, Hwoaran flew against the electrycal post and the post slowly felled on Hwoarang´s bike crushing it like a bug...

Hwoarang: NOOOOOOO my new bike Crying or Very sad!!! Now it´s personal
Steve: Bring it on!!

Steve was preparing to deliver a right hook on Hwoarang´s chin but he doged

Steve: What?! he wasn´t this fast before...

Instantly after Hwoarang used "sky rocket" on steve hitting him right on his teeth, and while steve was in mid air Hwoarang jumped and used "hunting hawk" the last kick was so strong that steve´s face was nailed to the concrete...

Hwoarang: Ufff! maybe i got a bit too far... is he dead?!
Steve: You need.... to... do... better... then that!!!
Hwoarang: woo you´re a tough one! that´s why kazuya wants you...
Steve: i´ll never fight for him... Why are you helping him, you´re not a bad person like him, he is sadistic and loves to cause pain to others..
Hwoarang: Actually... i don´t have a choise! and soon neither will you...

Steve in despair tried one last attack... But he failed and Hwoarang kicked him right on his chest leaving him out of breath...

Hwoarang: you realized why you lost didn´t you...?
Steve: Damn you...
Hwoarang: You are indeed faster with your punches then i am with my kicks, well before i was resurrected!
Steve: ??????????
Hwoarang: and my kicks have longer reach then your punches, so you lost in the moment i found you... now sleep, because you will be needed at full conditions

Steve fainted, Hwoarang grabbed Steve and he wispered...

Hwoarang: Sorry man, it´s nothing personall i just... didn´t had any choise

Hwoarang left the place with steve on his shoulders, finding a way to go back to G-corporation, but now he had no bike... so he is looking for a taxi loool

Meanwhile in Dragunóv´s heardquarters in Syberia...

General: Well done Dragunov you succesfully completed your mission, but you were a bit trashed weren´t you
Dragunov:...........................
Scientist 1: Sir we are ready for the "awakening" program...
General: Go for it!!

The scientists injected, the nano-machines in the unkown corpse that was inside the pod, and sudently it began to move...

Scientist 2: it seems ok... shall we continue?!
Dragunov: Wave head to say yes*

Sudently, the pod broke and, the entidy removed all the tubes attached to it by himself, it looked around and asked with a malicious voice...

??????': Were am i? who are you?
General: i´ll be the one asking you... who are you?
??????: Insolent fools my name shall be the last thing you´ll know before you die so listen carefully... I am Kenpachi Mishima

Kenpachi was brought back!!! the first Mishima whith the devil gene, and by far the strongest what will happen to Dagunov and the General...

You´ll have to wait untill next monday*
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Post by KM_Lord on Fri Aug 07, 2009 8:30 am

awesome chapter!!!I like it... Very Happy

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