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Post by greekman on Fri Aug 07, 2009 8:31 am

KM_Lord wrote:awesome chapter!!!I like it... Very Happy

glad that you like it Very Happy
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Post by greekman on Mon Aug 10, 2009 4:38 am

Chapter 4: "Mishima Zaibatsu protection squad captains"

Dragunov´s HQ in Syberia...

Kenpachi: Long time since i stretch my body! Aww it feels soo good, maybe i´ll take out the rust by killing you
General: You really thought we would awaken you and not be prepared, if you wanted to attack us?! you´re a fool

Kenpachi tried to activate his devil gene but he failed...

Kenpachi: What!!! wich kind of sorcery did you used on me?
General: We modified your body, so that you can´t use your powers in cold places, we did that so you would never attack mother Russia!!
Kenpachi: HAHAHAHA!!! you scared me for a moment, even without my full power i shall crush you like bugs, you underestimated ME!!!

Kenpachi punched the pod sending it flying through the wall, everybody was shocked to see such strenght even without using the devil gene.
Dragunov, runned forward to imobilize him but kenpachi in a blink, was standing right behind him, dragunov sensed him and kicked back, kenpachi grabbed his leg with ease and said...

Kenpachi: You´re strong! but still you have no chance to defeat me...

Dragunov for the first time in his life sensed fear...

Kenpachi: and i like your battle techinque i shall make it my own...

Kenpachi grabbed Dragunov´s head and started to absorv His strenght

Kenpachi. This is just one of my best abilities, now your strenght and techniques are part of my own

Dragunov felled on his knees, completly stone cold dead, and his body looked like it was sucked dry

General: How?? you shouldn´t be able to use your devil abilities...
Kenpachi: Who said i used a devil´s ability...? i learned this long before i had my powers, it´s a spirital technique, normal humans can´t use it... Now DIE!!
General: Wait!!! if you spare me i´ll tell you how you can use your full power even in cold places...
Kenpachi: Don´t need to tell, if you know i shall make that knowledge my own as well!!

Kenpachi used again his ability and learned about the existence of a demon sealed in far away, in temple and his powers envolved ice, so if he absorved his powers he would be at full potential again, that demon is... Azazel

Kenpachi left the facility and now he searches for azazel, to become the most powerfull being on the face of earth... who will stop him...?

Meanwhile at Mishima Zaibatsu HQ

Jin: Lars have you prepared what i asked?
Lars: Yes sir!! we putted 20 subjects in 4 different rooms so in total there are 80 fighters, the last one standing in each room will be your personall guard along with myself
Jin: i don´t need no guards!! i need squad captains, because i can´t be around everywere, and there´s the rumor that G-corporation is doing the same thing...

Sudently a "beep" is heard at room number 3...

it seems that we have one already...
a blond haired person left the room, it had his clothes dirty, and was slightly bleeding from the forhead, but was walking with proud!

Jin: Why do you want to work for us?
???: Because i want to kill Kazuya mishima
Jin: And what´s your name?
???: My name is Leo...

G-corporation HQ

Hwoarang: Here it is!

Drops Steve on the table*

Kazuya: what took you soo long?
Hwoarang: He trashed my bike, and i didn´t had any money so i walked here...
Kazuya: Useless... with the time you took to bring him here i already made business with another fighter so we just need 2 more...
Hwoarang: And who is he or she?
Kazuya: You may enter!

The door opens and Bryan Fury enters the room!

Hwoarang: what??? You? it figures...
Bryan: I accepted the invitation because of the body you promised me kazuya!
Kazuya: yes indeed! i will fulfill our promise... but for now i want you to capture the person we talked about...
Bryan: whatever...
Kazuya: and bring him alive and well! or else he won´t be usefull at all
Bryan: Presuming he won´t kill me first...
Kazuya: and for the last one... we´re getting into an agreement...
Hwoarang: (Damn i don´t like this, why does kazuya want me, bryan, steve and other 2 so much?? he could choose anyone... why us??)

Note: () will be used for monologue from now on*

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Re: the lone wolf

Post by assassinNinaWilliams on Mon Aug 10, 2009 4:54 am

VERY GOOD! Smile
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by jeswd on Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:25 am

Great work!! Wink
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by greekman on Tue Aug 11, 2009 4:03 am

jeswd wrote:Great work!! Wink

thank you Surprised
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by greekman on Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:04 am

Chapter 5: "it´s just business..."

G-corporation HQ*

Kazuya: Hwoarang, Bryan before you go to and get the remaining targets i´ll need you to escort me...
Bryan: Whatever but if that redhead looks at me in a funny way, i´ll kill him!
Hwoarang: I would like to see you try... maybe you would be surprised
Kazuya: SHUT UP!! both of you if you don´t cooperate you´ll be punished!
Hwoarang: (i´m soo going to kill you after this)
Bryan:.................
Hwoarang: so were are we going then?
Kazuya: to Monáco, we will visit Rochefort inc.
Hwoarang: Rochefort... i know that name from somewhere...
Bryan: Why are we going to do there?
Kazuya: Business, Rochefort oil company has been taken by Mishima Zaibatsu... So we are going to recover it and own a partnership...
Bryan: Very good idea...
Hwoarang: And what about Steve?
Kazuya: he is contained for now, i´ll deal with him myself when we´re back


Rochefort inc. Head chief office*
Kazuya, Hwoarang, and Bryan enter the office... inside there was Mr. Rochefort... and Lili was peeking through the door lock...

Kazuya: So resuming, we will take your oil back if you give us a 80% ownership of it´s stocks...
Mr. Rochefort: W... what? that would let me bankrupt... can we get to a better agreement?!
Bryan: Who the hell are you talking to like that? you´ll pay!

Bryan jumped forward and was almost hitting mr. rochefort but Lili came just in time and blocked his attack...

Mr. Rochefort: Lili what are you doing here?!
Lili: Father we can´t trust them, that´s why i came, i know i did the right thing...
Bryan: Get the hell out of my WAY!!

Lili was distracted because she was talking to her father, and she wasn´t fast enough to avoid a direct kick on her head, she felled on the floor stunned by the pain

Mr. Rochefort: P... please don´t!!

Bryan was preparing the final blow when suddently Hwoarang jumped from behind and kicked him on the back of his head sending bryan against the wall

Bryan: Aaargh, you´ll pay for this!!
Kazuya: Stop!

Bryan stood still, he looked to Hwoarang and said:

Bryan: next time you won´t be so lucky brat!
Hwoarang: Next time i won´t so gentle with my kicks...
Lili: You´re Jin´s rival... i thought you were a good guy... i was wrong you´re as despicable as all the mishimas!!

Hwoarang wispered to Lili

Hwoarang: Believe me... i don´t want to help them but i have no choise... don´t make me have to fight you... i don´t want to, take advantage of this oportunity and be quiet. Live today and take your revenge tomorrow... that´s what i´m doing

Hwoarang showned Lili a deep scar on his chest right in the place were lies the heart...

Lili: What happened to you??!!
Hwoarang: I lost my humanity... but i would hate to see you loose your life... so please don´t struggle!
Lili: ok...

Kazuya: I´ll give you one week to consider! i´ll be back afterwards if we don´t have business then you are disposable...
Mr. Rochefort:...........

The 3 of G-corporation left, Kazuya looked at Hwoarang and Bryan

Kazuya: don´t you ever act without my orders never again, got it?
Hwoarang and Bryan:.....................


Meanwhile at Mishima´s HQ

Lars: we have a winner of room number one, is a professional assassin...
Jin: Good bring him(her) here

The door opens and enters... Nina Williams

Jin: I know you, why do you wan´t to work for me?
Nina: for the money, and another reason...
Jin: ok... i have a mission for you already...
Nina: yes sir...?
Jin: Go with Lars and infiltrate G-corporation HQ you´re objective shall be espionage and cover Lars, because his mission is a lot more dangerous then yours...
Lars: I knew it... this is going to be a pain...
Jin: You Lars are going to retrieve a sample of Kazuya´s DNA, but if the situation is critical, get out of there at once!! i can´t afford losing my first commander like that...
Lars: understood sir
Nina: and what am i suposed to observe...?
Jin: i want you to find out who are the fighters employed by kazuya... all my spies have been murdered even before they gave me the names... you´ll need extreme caution.
Nina: Hmf boy even before you were born i did these kind of things...
Jin:.....................


somewhere i Russia on a local pub*

TV: There´s a lot of tension between the two greatest corporations, war is about to start! Between G-corporation leaded by Kazuya mishima and jin kazama his son...

a man drinking looked and said

Kenpachi: Interesting... so after all i´m not the last Mishima! maybe i´ll make a litlle visit there...


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Re: the lone wolf

Post by KM_Lord on Tue Aug 11, 2009 9:10 am

awesome!!! applause

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Re: the lone wolf

Post by jeswd on Tue Aug 11, 2009 10:05 am

Good. Wink
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by assassinNinaWilliams on Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:25 am

WOOT! Nina! ^^ awesome!
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by greekman on Fri Aug 14, 2009 4:59 am

Chapter 6 "Steve's new goal!"

G-corporation HQ*

Kazuya went to the chambers were Steve was held captive...

Kazuya: Steve Fox... The boxing prodigy... I have a deal to offer!
Steve: I don´t care!! i hate you all damn Mishimas...
Kazuya: You already know that Nina is your mother, but i know who´s your father...
Steve: !!!!!!
Kazuya: And the origin of that scar...

Steve grabbed Kazuya's collar and pressed him against the wall, Kazuya punched him on the stomach

Kazuya: The only way your father will stay alive is if you work for me!!
Steve: Damn you!! you did this to Hwoarang too, didn´t you?!
Kazuya: Well yes! i need some selected fighters especially you and Hwoarang, that´s why you´ll form a team...
Steve: I have no choise... Just like Hwoarang said...
Kazuya: So... will you work for me, or shall i kill your father?!
Steve: You... ok i´ll work for you, but you better be telling the truth, if not i shall rip your head out of your shoulders!

a soldier came in*

Soldier: Sir!! the movement sensors picked something...
Kazuya: (hmmm Bryan is on his mission but i still have Steve and Hwoarang...)
Steve: So i guess here´s my first job hein?!
Kazuya: indeed, you will go to the lower section and engage whoever is here, while Hwoarang shall be at the upper section to protect the labs... tell him that for me!
Steve: Yes...

Steve delivered the message to Hwoarang and both took theyr positions, meanwhile...
Bryan Fury is looking for his mark, he enters a local pub and asks...

Bryan: Does anyone knows this man? shows picture*

All people where shocked and some even fled...

Bryan: hmm guess you do know after all...

someone comes in... is Craig Marduk!!

Marduk to bartender: give me a beer!!

the bartender gives him a beer, almost passing out with fear..

Bryan: So you´re the famous Marduk...
Marduk: What the hell you want?
Bryan: i have an offer, G-corporation wants to employ you...
Marduk: and what do i gain?
Bryan: Money...
Marduk: humpf!! and i´ll work with a wuss like you who thinks is a S.W.A.T member or something...?
Bryan: Watch your toungue... i´ll kill you!!
Marduk: let´s do like this... if you beat me i´ll go, if not i´ll crush you to dust!
Bryan: you asked for it!

Bryan grabbed the table and threw it to Marduk, wich he headbutted while in the air and broke it to pieces! Marduk grabbed Bryan´s head and threw him through the bar´s wall, and Bryan felled with his back right on the street sidewalk..

Bryan: Damn!! he is a Beast!!

Bryan got up, and tackled Marduk and punched him whyle he was on the ground, he kept punching him and smashing his head on the concrete, bryan stops but marduk was still conscious and he didn´t look mich injured...

Marduk: is that the best you can do you maggot?!

Marduk grabbed Bryan and faceplanted him soo hard that Bryan´s head broke the concrete and made a hole on the street, any mortal man should die with such a strike...

Marduk: HEHE!! another one bites the dust... or better yet, the concrete!

while Marduk was turning his back, bryan got up, he was so pissed he grabed a big motorcycle that was nearby and threw it right on Marduk´s head, he never saw it coming...

Bryan: Dammit you´re one tough guy...

Bryan grabbed Marduk and took him away to G-corporation


meanwhile Lars and Nina were inside G-corp, Nina said...

Nina: Kazuya is on the upper floors, i´ll activate the alarm here and you shall find Kazuya!
Lars: Good idea, but be carefull!!
Nina: How nice of you... but you should be carefull, after all i think is past your bedtime...
Lars: haha...

Lars left to find Kazuya...

Nina: Now it´s time for business...

nina senced a presence right beside her, she dodged a powerfull punch that smashed a pillar... the attacker was Steve Fox!!

End chapter* next Chapter "Steve vs Nina & Lars vs Hwoarang" coming on monday

ps: sorry for not uploading this before i had no time... cheers
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Post by jeswd on Fri Aug 14, 2009 6:47 am

One word: awesome.
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Re: the lone wolf

Post by KM_Lord on Fri Aug 14, 2009 9:01 am

Marduk in da story!!!awesome!!!

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Post by greekman on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:20 am

Chapter 7: "Steve vs Nina & hwoarang vs Lars"

G-corporation lower level*

Steve: So... it´s you...
Nina: Steve... What are you doing here?
Steve: I work for G-corporation now...
Nina: Why?!
Steve: It´s not of your concern..
Nina: You´re in my way, if you don´t walk away i´ll kill you
Steve: I would like to see you try...

Nina took her gun and aimed at steve and pulled the trigger, steve predicted that and dodged right on time, Steve punched Nina on the ribs and she fliched with pain...

Steve: Run while you can, i don´t want to kill you...
Nina: You don´t have a choise... if you don´t kill me i´ll kill you!!

Nina kicked Steve on the head with no warning, Steve felt the taste of blood in his mouth... he got up and threw a punch at Nina but she dodged and Steve hit a pipe, causing the steam to fill the hall

Nina: (now is my chance!!)

Nina prepared to kill Steve but... she felt something was wrong after all she was his mother... instead she retreated leaving Steve

Steve: (she got away... it was better this way...)


G-corporation upper level*

Lars was looking for the head office where should be kazuya... but

Hwoarang: So... you are the intruder...
Lars: you´re Hwoarang!!!
Hwoarang: hmmm yes...
Lars: We thought you were dead!!
Hwoarang: Not thanks to Jin...
Lars: I don´t want to face you my target is Kazuya
Hwoarang: well you had bad luck, i´ll kick you untill you´ll spit your teeth for a week
Lars: you don´t understand... Jin wants a cure..
Hwoarang: A cure for what? his devil gene yeah right...
Lars: stand back!
Hwoarang: make me!!!

Lars tried to land a punch on hwoarang´s jaw but he missed, Hwoarang tried to kick Lars but he dodges and does an uppercut, Hwoarang lands on hiss feet and lands a kick in Lars chest making him flinch, Hwoarang took advantage of the situation and landed a serial of kicks sending Lars through the wall...

Lars: damn!! How is he soo strong?!
Hwoarang: Because thanks to your boss i lost my humanity

Hwoarang shows the scar on his chest...

Hwoarang: instead of a heart i have a machine pumping my blood and the nano-machines that keep me alive... Thanks to Jin i´m just a corpse allowed to roam like the living
Lars: i pitty you Hwoarang, but i still have a mission...
Hwoarang: sorry but i won´t let you...
Lars: I didn´t want to use this against anyone except Kazuya, but it seems i have no choise...

Lars takes off his left hand glove and shows a tatto mark on his hand

Lars: "the left hand of God!"


What kind of technique is Lars preparing and why does he have a tatoo on his arm?

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Post by KM_Lord on Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:20 am

wow!!!awesome!!!very good story!!!

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Post by greekman on Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:36 am

chapter 8: "Lars secret..."

Lars showed a tribal tatoo in his hand, that was extending through the whole arm...

Lars: this is my secret... you're strong, so i have no choise...
Hwoarang: What the hell is that?

in an instant aproached to Hwoarang and whispered in his ear

Lars: I am a Mishima aswell, so i have traces of the devil gene, the difference between me and Jin, and of course Kazuya is that i sealed it in my left arm...
Hwoarang: What??!! Impossible!!!

Lars puts his left hand in Hwoarang's chest...

Lars: "Destructive wrath"

A blast suddently sends Hwoarang flying with huge speed, making him breaktrough the wall...

Lars: Sorry Hwoarang, my mission is all that matters. You're the first person that really saw this power of mine, sadly you won't live to tell the tale...
Hwoarang: Like.... i... would... die... with THAT!
Lars: You surprise me Hwoarang, you have great heart, but you're just like a lone wolf you are determined and strong, but alone you are weaker...
Hwoarang:........

Hwoarang passes out*

Lars feels an intense pain in his left arm...

Lars: Damn! i need to be more carefull, or else the seal will break... i'm saving this power for defeating Kazuya and contain Jin...
But i used up too much energy... i'm soo tired

Lars flinches for a second, and pauses to recover his breath, Nina comes...

Nina: Lars!! are you OK?
Lars: Yes... just a bit tired
Kazuya: So... you are the intruders....

Nina and Lars are shocked, the head of G-corp appears

Lars: Nina we have to be carefull, we don´t have enough info of how well he controls the devil gene, this could be dangerous...
Nina: we´ll just get a sample of him and retreat, reinforcements must be coming any minute...
Lars: You didn´t finished your opponent?! That doesn´t seem like you at all...
Nina: Shut up!
Kazuya: Enough!! it's time for some action, i want to exercise a bit, and ease my bloodlust... Twisted Evil

Window breaks* and Leo is on the cene

Lars: Finally!! what took you soo long?!
Leo: Had some troubles...
Nina: it's our chance!! we can win like this
Kazuya: HAHAHA!!! don't make me laugh! you defeated one of my best men and escaped from another, but what do you think? that i wouldn't be prepared?! Since you came here i called the men who weren't here...

Bryan, and Marduk came*

Marduk: Haaaa!! my head still hurts you bas**** that motorcycle you threw hurted like hell
Bryan: you los your bet, now you'll work for us...
Marduk: Just pay me good money, to buy lots of beer...
Bryan: ........

Lars: This is bad! We lost all the advantage, we need to work a strategy fast!
Nina: I'll take the big guy...
Leo: I'll take the white haired one
Lars: And Kazuya is mine!

Meanwhile somewhere in East Europe... a man walks close to a temple and stares to the gates..

Zafina: Who dares to aproach this temple?!
Kenpachi: I want to absob the powers of this temple demon...
Zafina: I sense a very intense evil spirit leaking from you... you shall not pass!
Kenpachi: We will see that...


Next chapter cooming soon*


Note: i'm not a really devoted cristian, but as some knows that the right hand of God has the power of creation, and the left hand is destruction. that´s the reason Lars destructive power is sealed on his left hand
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Post by KM_Lord on Fri Aug 21, 2009 12:49 pm

very good plot...there are many characters...

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Post by greekman on Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:10 am

KM_Lord wrote:very good plot...there are many characters...

more will be added and it will have a twist in the story. (enough said almost spoiled...)
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Very interesting&amazing!

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Post by greekman on Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:34 am

Chapter 9: "G-corporatin and Mishima Zaibatsu showdown"

Somewere in east Europe, Azazel's temple

Zafina: Back away, this isn't a place for the likes of you...
Kenpachi: I need the strenght of the demon inside that temple, without it i can't use my powers with this cold...
Zafina: If you won't leave... then you shall die

In an instant Zafina jumped and twisted her body in the air, delivering fast kicks and hand strikes on Kenpachi, he blocked them all but with a lot of dificullty, Zafina landed on her feet surprised because hes was the first one to survive her attacks... Kenpachi stoped and prepared a "raijin" stance (like heihachi's) and he punched the ground with all his might cracking it and creating a fissure that almost swallowed Zafina, she escaped at the last moment, but Kenpachi was already behind her preparing another strike...

Zafina: (this is no human abilities, what the hell is he?!)

She twisted her body and evaded Kenpachi's strikes... she jumped away to gain a distance from him...

Kenpachi: Very impressive!! i'm delighted to fight against such a wonderfull opponent. But i finished my warm up, it's time to fight for real, and i don't have time to waste...

Kenpachi disapeared in a flash and appeared right in front of Zafina

Zafina: (such speed... i am no match...)

Kenpachi landed a powerfull punch on Zafina making her fly through the temple door and breaking it to pieces...

Kenpachi: well i killed two birds with one stone...

As Zafina lies unconciess on the floor, kenpachi makes his way to the temple, were he sees an enchained Azazel!!

Kenpachi: Oh... You're a big one ain't you?!


meanwhile at G-corp HQ*

G-corp and Mishima Zaibatsu warriors are preparing for batlle

Lars: Kazuya... you're mine
Kazuya: yeah right... i don't have patience for weaklings

Leo: So you're a cyborg, let's see how good you are as a trainig dummy...
Bryan: Hahahahahaha! i'll crush that pretty face to a pulp you're just a maggot compared to me!!

Marduk: Wow nice babe!! you're coming with me!!
Nina: I don't like apes...
Marduk: Guess i'll knock you out first, and then take you away
Nina: Very... Neandertall....

the fight shall be narrated one by one*

Leo throws a punch, Bryan grabs her hand and laughs but it was a trick... Leo kicked bryan on his teeth, but he regained his stand quickly and landed a knee kick on Leo's stomach...

Bryan: you're weak!!!

Leo endures the pain and grabs an iron stick stabing Brian on the chest

Bryan: Ha!! that doesn't hurt at all
Bryan´s cpu: "generator damage, aproaching critical point"
Bryan: (damn, not now...)

Leo takes advantage of Bryan's distraction and lands a serie of kicks and punches, Bryan was getting defeated...

Leo: After all the weak one is you!! Cyborg or not...

Bryan had a flashback of the times when he was on the Interpol... and how he really wished to be Human again...

Bryan got on his feet...

Bryan: No way i'm loosing to you!!

Bryan in despair landed severall punches and kicks, injuring Leo... when she was down Bryan removed the iron stick that was stuck on his chest and prepared for the final blow...

Bryan: This is the end!!

Sudently....

Bryan's cpu: "critical point! critical point! emergency shutdown..."

Bryan felled on the floor like a stone... Leo survived by litlle but she was too injured to help her companions...


Nina: Don't get in my way!

She points a shotgun to Marduck but he grabs it ant twists it to a "U" shape

Marduk: You don't need these toys...

Marduk threw a punch, Nina evaded it and observed how the wall behind her was smashed like cartboard

Nina: (this guy is a beast!!)

Marduk grabed a boulder (remains of the fight of Lars against Hwoarang) and threw it to Nina, she threw a grenade that destroyed the boulder to tiny pieces, leaving a lot of smoke on the battle scene

Nina: (damn where is he?!)

Marduk apperars from nowhere and grabs Nina.

Marduk: Now i got you!!

Marduk slamed Nina against the floor but something was wrong... his strenght on the arm... the way he slamed was like a kid, had no strenght on it,

Nina: Too easy...

Marduk notices a litlle scratch on his arm...

Marduk: Poison?! damn you...
Nina: you'll loose consciousness in 5 min
Marduk: Hehe... that's enough time to crush you!!!

Marduk grabbed Her by the hair and threw her off the window, Nina falls through a 500m buylding...

Lars: Ninaaaa!!! Damn you all

Marduk feels weak and faints right after the fight...


Lars: I guess it's you and me now, Kazuya...
Kazuya: Let's see how strong you are...

Next chapter: Kazuya vs Lars, Kenpachi vs Azazel and a surprise that shall shock you all...

hope you like it...


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Post by KM_Lord on Mon Aug 24, 2009 5:52 am

very very very good!!!

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Post by greekman on Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:40 am

Chapter 10: "the true Devil"

Azazel's temple*

Kenpachi: You're one big guy!!
Azazel: WRAAAAARRR

the temple trembles with his roar...
Azazel enters in a rampage and breaks the chains

Kenpachi: interesting... You are powerfull

Azazel fires a laser beam, it was a direct hit that should have pulverized Kenpachi, but he was standing with a glaze in his eyes...

Kenpachi: you remind me of Shin! long time since i don't fight with such a caliber opponent!

Kenpachi runned at Azazel's direction and delivered serie of punches and kicks, the temple was shaking with all that power released, Azazel in pain summoned ice pillars and tryed to crush Kenpachi, but he was too strong, even in his human form he seems invencible, Azazel rolls into a ball and hits Kenpachi, Kenpachi for the first time since centuries was injured, but he had his bloodlust at the top!! He punched Azazel right on his teeth, Azazel flinched and Kenpachi took the advantage to pierce his chest and with his hand he crushed Azazel´s heart...

Kenpachi: Your power is MINE!!!!

he began to transform to his demon form:

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Kenpachi: This is the beggining of the END!!!

the world is in danger with Kenpachi full powered


Meanhile in G-corp HQ*

Lars: You'll pay for everything, Kazuya...
Kazuya: HAHA!! No weakling like you will defeat me!!
Lars: let's see about that!!

Lars attacks Kazuya but Kazuya isn't an easy opponent and blocks lars attacks, Kazuya tries to punch Lars on the jaw but Lars dodges in the last moment

Lars: (I'm too tired from the fight with Hwoarang, he wounded me bad)
Kazuya: Not bad, but it's not enough either

Said that Kazuya delivers a heavy punch on Lars ribs, Lars gets blind with the pain, as he looses perception for a second...

Lars: (i'll have to use it again...)

Lars grabs his left arm and starts to charge...

Kazuya: What?! can't be...

Kazuya smiles and he transforms, to Devil!!

Lars: So you did manage to control your devil gene...
Devil Kazuya: Indeed... but you seem to hav an amusing ability aswell...
Lars: "left hand of God: Dance of the dead"

Lars in an instant was face to face with devil soo close, he delivered a painfull punch in Devil's face, and devil's body suffered dozens of explosions right after Lars punched him... Lars felled on the ground exausted, and Devil... was wounded but still conscious and really mad

Devil: Damn you!! How dare you to injure me like this!!!
Lars: I ment to kill you, but i failed (still i got some tissue sample from devil, it's time to retreat)

Meanhile*
Nina was falling whe she saw a helicopter ladder, wich she grabbed...

Nina: Thank God...

The helicopter was from Mishima Zaibatsu

Nina: Sargent! Help Lars and Leo to retreat, we are in disavantage, we failed
Sargent: Yes Mam!!

Tekken force invaded a weakened G-corporation, and they were able to find Leo uconsciess, Lars and Kazuya

Lars: Take her away....
Soldier: sir what about you?!
Lars: I need so stall him for a while, now go!!
Soldier: Yes Sir!!!
Devil: You won't survive Lars... I'll make sure of that

scene: Hwoarang lies on the ground unconsious, twitch on his hand*

Nest chapter: "Hwoarang's revenge, the lone wolf bites back"
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Chapter 11: "Hwoarang's revenge, the lone wolf bites back"

G-Corp HQ

Devil: You know, you can't defeat me... give up
Lars: I prefer to die trying
Devil: Fine by me...
Lars: (i used too much of my power, i have strengh for one more attack, but i may die...)

Devil sudently attacked! Devil grabbed Lars Head and slamed it on the wall, Lars with pure instinct grabbed Devil by the neck

Lars: (this is my last shot) "left hand of GOD: Death bringer"

Devil's life energy was being sucked away!! but Lars was suffering the same effect...

Devil: (What power is this?!)
Lars: (i... must...hold...)

But Lars couldn't hold anymore and fainted before Devil

Devil: Damn... that was close... he is dangerous, i must kill him now

meanwhile in the other room where Hwoarang lies down...
Hwoarang regains consciousness

Hwoarang: (ouch!! that hurted...)

Hwoarang feels something different about him...

Hwoarang: My head... it doesn't feel as heavy as before... it can't be!! The chip... maybe it's damaged, maybe it lost it's effect, that means.... Kazuya!! you're mine!!

While Devil was preparing the final blow do kill Lars, sudently Hwoarang jumped and kicked Devil in the head, sending him flying four a couple meters

Devil: You!!! (how was he able to hit me?!)
Hwoarang: What goes around comes around Kazuya (thanks Lars, now i'm free)
Devil: you'll pay for you insolence maggot!!

Devil fires his laser beam, but Hwoarang dodges, he smiles...

Hwoarang: Hahaha! you´re slower...
Devil: Why?! Why you're betraing me??
Hwoarang: Why the hell do you need me in the first place?
Devil: Because you're strong, and you defeated Jin once, i revived you!!!
Hwoarang: I would prefer to lie on a grave than be like this... You turned me into a monster...
Devil: I made you Immortal!! you'll be forever young, and strong! You should be thankfull
Hwoarang: What good is to live forever just to witness chaos and despair?! That's what is happening because of you Mishimas, damn you all!!

Hwoarang grabs Lars and puts him on his shoulder

Hwoarang: I'm not from G-corp anymore! but i won't join Zaibatsu either, i'll find a way to kill you and Jin (i'll save you now Lars because my freedom is thanks to you..)

Hwoarang fled from the scene with Lars...

Devil returns to his human form...

Kazuya: This is bad... i need another person to replace him, and i'm gonna hire an assassin to kill him, hmm i know who i'm gonna call already...

Hwoarang leaves Lars at an Hotel and leaves...

Hwoarang:(i´m gonna learn how to manipulate these nano-machines and then i'll end this warfare my way!!!)

Hwoarang goes to the forest with nothing but will to get stronger, and hatred against Jin and Kazuya, the one who killed him and the one who resurected him...
Someone was in the woods, Hwoarang turned his back and saw a man...

Hwoarang: Who are you?!
Raven: My name doesn't matter, we want to employ you
Hwoarang: What for?!
Raven: To help us end G-corporation and Mishima Zaibatsu... are you in?
Hwoarang: Yes i am...

End of chapter, hope you liked it today is my last day here because like i said i'm going to holidays, cheers!!
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Chapter 12: "A new beggining..."

Raven tokk Hwoarang to a abandoned House in the woods...

Raven: You have a great potencial in our company..
Hwoarang: Why do you chose me?!
Raven: Because besides of having very good fighting skills, you are very determined to beat Jin and Kazuya
Hwoarang:...............
Raven: We know about your nano-machines in your body, and we know all it's effects
Hwoarang: How?!
Raven: Hmpf don't underestimate my Ninja skills, after all espionage and stealth are some of my best features...
Hwoarang: So tell me who are you?
Raven: My name doesn't matter, and you don't need more info then this... We are a company who mantain balance and peace in this world, but G-corp and Zaibatsu are now to powerfull for us to handle, so we needed to gather more members especially for melee tactics...
Hwoarang: So you recruited more fighters then me right?!
Raven: The main objective of my mission in the last tournament was to defeat Jinpachi Mishima from creating chaos in the world, but... we were also gathering info about other fighters...
Hwoarang: I see and that's why you came to me...

Baek enters from a hidden door*

Baek: Yes, Hwoarang...
Hwoarang: Master... Sorry for not saying anything but G-corp...
Baek: I know... It's ok Hwoarang. I will just help you to finish your training and become even a greater Taekwondo fighter then me
Hwoarang: Thank you...
Baek: But promise me this! you will always use your skills for the good of others...
Hwoarang: Yes, Master
Raven: I'll contact you in one month, untill then i will hire the other members of your team

Hwoarang and Baek leave for the mountains to begin the last training, Hwoarang feels releaved for now being a part of a plan to bring balance to this world of hatred*

Meanwhile in Mishima Zaibatsu*

Jin: The mission was a FAILURE!!!
Lars: Forgive us sir, but they were very strong...
Nina: and it seems they are getting stronger by the minute
Leo: We almost didn't maked it

Someone walks in the room...

Jin: Maybe him won't be as dumb as all you are
Armor King: ........Rawr
Lars: Sir we still lack one member...
Jin: that one will be me! If i want a a proper job to be fulfilled i need to get in the action... our next move will be removing one obstacle between G-corp and us...
Lars: Give us the order sir
Jin: Locate, and kill Heihachi Mishima
Lars: Yes sir (with pleasure)


in G-corp meeting room*

Kazuya: Damn!!! Hoarang you will pay!!
Bryan: We need a new member
Marduk: i wanna trash that doll-face who poisoned me!!
Kazuya: Sorry to disapoint you Marduk, but i think that our newest member will want Nina just for her...

G-corp and Mishima Zaibatsu have new members, but Hwoarang new goal is to finish both companies, what will happen?! And who is G-corp new memeber, and why AK is working for Zaibastu?! find out in next chapters
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Post by kazamafan15 on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:43 pm

Intresting keep them comming

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Post by greekman on Wed Sep 30, 2009 1:48 pm

kazamafan15 wrote:Intresting keep them comming

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